Hello!

ah hello!   

My name is Naeko and I'm a new member here// 
I think I've made my account here a while ago but I wasnt very involved.
I really want to be involved again in this community!

I've played a few otome games and visual novels and I'm hoping to make my own otome game in the future//

hello Naeko-san  !Welcome to OH again  !I'm Leeya nice to meet you!    
nee..what game you have played so far?what platform you used?   

Naeko wrote: I'm hoping to make my own otome game in the future

woah  !Why not..I wait for it    ..ahaha..what story you plan to make?I mean a plot.. 

Ah thanks LeeYa!   

Ah I've played Hakuoki, Diabolik Lovers, Brothers Conflict, and I have downloaded Starry Sky in Spring (Though I havent had the chance to play it yet//). I either play on PC or on my PSP. How about you?   

Ah actually! I already have some of my character designs planned out! and I was also wondering if you could give your opinion on it? I could show you the pictures, if that's okay haha//

I want to make a story where the heroine is a sorceress of some sort who runs a shop (she makes potions for something of eaual value, so it doesnt have to be money). she was falsely charged with theft and so she broke out of imprisonment in order to find out who had framed her. Along the way she meets people of different species from different planes of existence. The boy you choose will determine your fate. (whether you fight back the police or remain a fugitive, prove your innocence, etc.)

I'm still a bit unsure about the story so I think I still have to make a LOT of changes.  

Hello and welcome    !
BTW, that plot seems interesting so far.
Good luck on your project   .

@The_Cat_Lady 

Thank you very much! 
In your opinion, is there anything I should add on or change?   I would really like to hear your thoughts on this//

My idea about the plot is still very sketchy;;

Naeko wrote:
I want to make a story where the heroine is a sorceress of some sort who runs a shop (she makes potions for something of eaual value, so it doesnt have to be money). she was falsely charged with theft and so she broke out of imprisonment in order to find out who had framed her. Along the way she meets people of different species from different planes of existence. The boy you choose will determine your fate. (whether you fight back the police or remain a fugitive, prove your innocence, etc.)

I'm still a bit unsure about the story so I think I still have to make a LOT of changes.  

im already lovin the plot its very interesting(I hav a thing for a bishie whose not human  keep up the good work and oh welcome again(?)

AsukaKojima wrote:I hav a thing for a bishie whose not human  

ahhh // That's great! because me too!   

ah what non human bishounen do you like? I know its cliche, but I still love the classic cat boys and androids// but I need more variation  do you wanna see what I've come up with so far? I'm not very good with costumes and outfits but I try haha

@Naeko
kyaaaaa!Brother Conflict  !I want to play it!but I can't..haha..I'm just playing PC version..it's only platform I have..hehe  
oh!show me show me the pictures!   
hoho..its fantasy genre..hehe..so interesting!  
cat boy..so cute    ..I wonder what kind of species would have there..you said fight a police?Is there one of character that we can choose is police..?  hehe..Good luck2x  ..!I want to see it..
talk about 'people of different species from different planes of existence'..I don't know why its remind me Arakawa under the brigde..haha..its must be funny if there character such Hoshi and Taicho(a.k.a Kappa) is one of a character of your game..but sure I would like to see you own idea  more..hehe 

Hello Naekoさん
Welcome here~ I'd read your story, so the setting is medieval, or in future? Many magic and fantasy story located in future time too. Also, about other existence and maybe you would add other dimension world, do you planning to make parallel world for each routes like Amnesia? 

@Leeya
I'd downloaded Arakawa Under The Bridge (both season), but I give up after watch 2 episode and haven't touch the rest. Do you think I must finish watching this anime? or not? because I don't have motivation to finish this anime.

@kyuuichii
hohoho  ..If you want to watch just for fun,then I suggest you to watch it but if you're looking for understanding the story,I think better not  ..the story really funny(for me)    ..but I don't really understand what happen..the story is not complete..I put so much expectation from this anime but then,I'm quite disappointed to see the ending in seasons 2..its totally incomplete  ..but I still love this anime  ..I think better read its manga(I haven't read it yet..hehe) 

That plot seems fun. If I got better writer skills or were more confident..I would write my own plots for games and stuff. Or just fanfics.

Anyhow, welcome to the site!

Kouryuu wrote:If I got better writer skills or were more confident..I would write my own plots for games and stuff. Or just fanfics.

hohoh..I know what you mean..has idea to creating plot, fanfics and stuff but can't show it on writing..  I has make a novel,short stories and manga but all of them are half ways..Incomplete..haha 

LeeYa wrote:

Kouryuu wrote:If I got better writer skills or were more confident..I would write my own plots for games and stuff. Or just fanfics.

hohoh..I know what you mean..has idea to creating plot, fanfics and stuff but can't show it on writing..  I has make a novel,short stories and manga but all of them are half ways..Incomplete..haha 

Yeah. Same here. My stuff is just drafts, ideas, and half way finish stuff. XD But anyway...this is about our new member. Not our writing woes...

LeeYa wrote:cat boy..so cute    ..I wonder what kind of species would have there..you said fight a police?Is there one of character that we can choose is police..?  

Ah! that's a great idea! Thank you// Hopefully I can make a handsome policeman too//   

@kyuuichii
I believe it is set in the future haha; where dimensional travel is possible? parallel routes? I'm not sure if I would make it like that though, I think it would be completely different world altogether// I feel like I want to focus also on the fact that the heroine is "running away" and that the boys play some part to her survival. hmm, that makes me wonder.. should I add in an antagonist route? "if you can't beat them, join them" sort of ending?   

@Kouryuu
Thank you, but I sincerely think your writing seems very good! I'm not very good at coming up with ideas you see// which is probably why I haven't been able to come up with the dialogue for most of my characters// Ah, since you have a lot of ideas, do tell! I would really love to hear them   


PS: I'll try to post the pictures up soon, I haven't had the time lately, hence the late reply  

hee~ That's really good idea! I like antagonist route, especially the antagonist guy really hot and badass.